Student Essay #5: My Mother

by multilingualmania on October 27, 2010

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Our fifth student essay was written by Verylin Matias, a fifth grade student at Calmeca Academy for the Fine Arts and Dual Language in Chicago, Illinois. As a reminder, all entries will be posted “as is” without any revisions or editing by Multilingual Mania:

I have selected my mother as my strongest impact in my life as a student and in society as well my mother has been a role model, emotional, supporter  and has given me a great place to live in I will explain how she is such a good impact in my life.

My mother has given me emotional support since day one. My mother always trusted me due to the fact she has thought me right from wrong. By her teaching me such, I have been able to make better choices as a young woman. She has encouraged me to do my best at everything I do and to never give up that by me giving up will show that I’m not strong enough or smart enough and my mother has always told me that I could do anything I put my head into it. She is also the best person to me when I’m down she shows me so much love that it brightens up my day no matter how cloudy it has been my mother is real understanding on gives me the best advice I can get that’s why I think my mother has given me the best emotional support I can receive. My mother has also been the best role model for me. She has thought me not to worry about what others think or say about me, as long as I’m doing the right thing. She has shown me that being humble and warm hearted could win more love then being filled with superficial materials. She also teaches me to stand up for what I believe in no matter what the case is. She has though me that no mountain is high enough. Those are a few reasons why she is an excellent role model in my life….

My mother has always provided a roof over me and my sister’s shoulder she has given us a warm place to sleep and has provided us with everything we need to succeed in our school and daily life she has made sure that we have a warm plate of food for those long days of school. I really appreciate everything my mother has done for our family to be able to live our life peace-fully and motivated for the next day.

These are some of the reasons of how my mother has impacted my life and I also said that she has made an impact in society because my mother has also taught me that one person in the future. By being a veterinarian it will give other the hope and desire by saying it I can do it so can you. All at this has come from one special person who has given me love and support since the day I was born.

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{ 17 comments… read them below or add one }

Matira January 19, 2011 at 10:11 am

superb Essay!

chetan February 10, 2011 at 5:32 am

exclent asome essay while read this i m proud to be a son of my mother

ayushi May 26, 2011 at 1:33 am

i love it………….<3<3<3<3<3<3

adu June 14, 2011 at 7:29 pm


Gulfam........ June 18, 2011 at 4:22 am

I love my mother…………..

shaili August 29, 2011 at 12:49 am

this essay is shows how much importance of mother is there in our life .loved this essay.

naseeha September 3, 2011 at 3:53 am

i love my mother

megha September 21, 2011 at 6:51 am

that is a really god essay

Jane December 7, 2011 at 6:28 am

I love it so much I love my mother without her i am not here I just love her sop much!

deshana shah January 7, 2012 at 3:05 am

I love the essay it’s fabulous to be read. When I read this I felt like weeping, because it contains such a strong emotions and feelings. Now I feel that I should ste a awsome example for my parents.////////…..

bushra February 9, 2012 at 6:59 am

i looooove my mother so much i never express that how much love i do with her she is the only one in this world who can understand me and deals with me nicely may ALLAH give her all the happiness in her life she lives long AMEEN

tandin March 7, 2012 at 12:14 am

i really appreciate the and i enjoyed reading so much

Vargis March 8, 2012 at 1:57 am

An intimate, loving, caring character is well explained.Amazing.Congrats!

susmita das May 9, 2012 at 9:27 am

It’s a really awsome essay,I really feel proud to be a daughter & whoever has written it headsoff to her writing. BEST OF LUCK FOR FUTURE & keep it up.BYE

anuj May 10, 2012 at 9:06 am

i love my mother………… love u mom

samreen tajammul June 10, 2012 at 8:50 am

Its amazing!!!
No words to describe…….!!!!!

samreen tajammul June 10, 2012 at 8:55 am

Mother!!! This word associates with something sweet,tender and merciful.
Good essay but its not clearly define the word MOTHER….!!!!

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