Essay #15: My Dad

by multilingualmania on October 27, 2010

in Student Writing Contest

Our fifteenth student essay was written by Viviana Martinez, a fifth grade student at Calmeca Academy for the Fine Arts and Dual Language in Chicago, Illinois. As a reminder, all entries will be posted “as is” without any revisions or editing by Multilingual Mania:

The person I look up to in my life is my dad. I look up to my dad because he was always there for me when I need help. He gets me the supplies I need. He encourages me to where I am now in fifth grade. He gets me special gifts when I achieve anything important in school. He protects me and makes sure I’m fine. He cares and loves me just like I do for my dad.

My father works for real estate. He helps people get homes for shelter. His job is important because he helps people get houses if he did not get the job some people would not have lived in the house they are living now. He asked people he meets if they or know someone who needs a house that’s how he gets his customers. He helps people get a perfect home.

My dad has shown me to believe in myself and follow my dreams to become who ever I want to become. I know when I grow-up I will have a great career. I copy the things my dad does right not what he does wrong. He is a great dad. I know he inspired me.

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